Was having a lot of thoughts and decided to try my hand at this. Was kind of proud of how the second one turned out.
They say love is blind
but before you I could not see.
Romantic movies and poetry
finally fill my heart with glee.
With sorrow and sadness as well,
for I’m alone in this race.
You didn’t follow when I fell,
but I try to rise with grace.
A friend is all you want for now,
so a friend I try to be;
but if you ever want everything,
look no further than me.
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i think you have a good start
if you want some feedback
try to be more abstract, i understand what you’re going through but it’s needs to be more something outside so only a repeat reading makes the story